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1:05 pm July 21, 2011
| Beth
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Okay this one is going to really be out there, but I use the characters to voice things I am feeling. The characters in Moose County are sometimes real people to me. Maybe I should stop listening to the audio books every day, I am losing perspective. But they are after all, my cheap therapy and psychologist.
Jane had never seriously contemplated suicide before. Not ........serioiusly. Everyone gets depressed sometimes, fails to see the big picture of a problem, is unhappy with their choices in life, but this time was different. Jane felt utterley powerless and hopeless in the face of a mountain sized delima. How does one overcome loving and living with a person addicted to alcohol. She felt trapped like a caged animal in distress and no one to open the door. She for one monment thought of just ending it all. She looked up to the sky as tears rolled down her pals skin, rolling down her cheeks, down her jaw line and wetting her neck. She did not wipe the tears away. Her arms and hands felt paralyzed. To heavy to wipe tears. She sat for a long time in the grass behind her house and finally, slowly got up and walked into her house. She sat down and began what would end up a long letter to her boyfriend. Dear Dennis, she started.............
She told him of her feelings and that she was leaving. She advised him to confront the demons of his past and find the root of his issues that caused him to turn to drink to numb his pain. Then she got her car keys and put some clothes and other needs in a bag and drove off. She loved Dennis Hough with all her heart. She also knew that until he confronted his deep pain, he would find no peace and always be looking for something to dull his pain. She understood his issues of being lied to by his mother all his life. He grew up idolizing his father, only to learn at age 18, that he was not his real father. She knew the bitterness of his mother's feeling for his real father had left him sad a feeling confused. But he was an adult now, and a 21 year old was old enough to ge to the bottom of their issues. Maybe her leaving would finally give him the nudge he needed to get some help. She reflected on the day she had first seen Dennis in college. He was so handsome, even striking and she had turned her head at first meeting.
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1:36 pm July 21, 2011
| Beth
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She had turned and followed him as he walked away.
Chapter Two
Dennis Hough sped down a disserted road, miles away from civilization toward an unfamiliar destination. He was drivin a little to fast and his mind was ging at super sonic speed, with thoughts of the unknown. He had hopped a plane and made his way to this God forsaken place on a whim. His birlfriend of three years had walked out on him. He had lost his job due to tardiness and absentism. He was broke and could not even aford to buy the vodka he craved. He was not in a good place. He had decided to visit the grave of the man who had biologically fahtered him. He knew the man's name, that part was easy. He carried his father's name. Dennis Raymon Huff, Junior. He had not known the Junior part growing up. But he had seen it on his birth certificate when he was a teenager. And here he was, running from his life or running to his natural father. He did not know which. It was not like they would be reunited, for God's sake he was going to visit a grave not a person. He passed a sign that read: Pickax, 5 miles. He pressed the accelerator harder and sped on.
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1:40 pm July 21, 2011
| Beth
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He slowed his car when he arrived at the city limits of Pickax, looking around through the windows of the rental car. Several pedestrians stopped and looked at him like he was a carnival exhibit. They stared into his car and he stared back. He drove around a large traffic circle and on all sides he saw stone. A stone church, a stone post office, a stone library, a theater, he rounded the circle and pulled into the parking lot of a hotel called the McIntosh Inn. He thought, i will check in and then get some dinner. It is getting dark, so I will get directions to the cemetary and go out there tomorrow morning. Then I will find the local newspaper and look up his obituary.
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2:05 pm July 21, 2011
| Beth
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He did not know much about his father or his family. His mom had ranted about what a horrible person he had been, abandoning her and her baby when Dennis was just 4 months old. She told him he had died in Moose County and she had no idea when or where he was buried. For all Dennis new he had cousins or family in Moose County, his mom had said no, but he did not really believe much of what she said about the matter. He sometimes fantsized he would find a large loving family just waiting to meet him. But that was silly, he did not need a family. He had grown up an only child and he was used to being alone.
Thirty minutes after checking in he found himself walking around downtown Pickax as dusk. He was quaint buidling, most of stone. A florist, a men's shop, a luncheonette, a bookstore and a drugstore. The normal trapping os small town America, with a twist. The stone eddifices game a dignigty and solid look to everything. But the bright flowers in flowerboxes added a note of whimsy. He returend to the hotel and walked into the dining room, past a portrait of a woman seated at a pianon with a bracelet of coins around her wrist. Anne McIntosh Qwilleran, the plaque read. He wondered who she was, and obviously the hotel was named after her. he looked around the room, decorated tastelfully in arts and craft style. He always made a habit of taking in the building in his environment because he was a builder and buiding desinger himself, having majored in engineering and minoring in architecture in college and working for constructions companies, before his unfortunate termination. The hostess seated him at a table and took his drink order. He ordered water. He was going to make an effort not to drink during his time here. He was in a strange town in an unfamiliar state and the last think he needed was a DUI in this strange and far away land. He looked at the menu and selected a steak with parmesean potato souffle, baby carrots. The waitress brought out tiny buttery yeast rolls that melted in his mouth and he was enjoying them imensely while he was waiting for his meal when he got the strange feeling someone was looking at him.
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Oh, Beth, go on!!! This has really drawn me in! Question: I was just wondering about how to pronounce Hough (as "How" or "Huff") then you said the birth certificate named him as "Huff". Question answered, but a new question arises: is his name indeed spelled different on his birth certificate? if so, this could be significant.
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6:09 pm July 21, 2011
| Beth
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In the Cat Who Talked to Ghost we learn that it is pronounced HUFF, and spelled Hough. The Huff on the birth certificate is one of my stupid brain freeze typos. Sorry Joyce. Glad you like the story. Now, tell me, when Hough meets Qwill, should he be a bad guy or a good guy Qwill befriends?
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6:42 pm July 21, 2011
| Beth
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During the dessert course, Dennis was digging into a large piece of Key LIme Pie when he felt the hair on his neck stand on end. He finally turned around slowly to see if someone was staring at him and an attractive older coouple quickly averted thier eyes. Why were they staring, he thought. he nodded his head at them and continued eating. As he was leaving, the man, older, tall and with an overly large mustache got up and walked over. He stuck his hand out and said, Jim Qwilleran, have we met before, you look so familiar, but I can't place you. Dennis stuck out his hand and said, Dennis Hough and heard the older woman who was just approaching gasp and put a hand over her mouth. Dennis she cried, Dennis..........then with a question in her voice, Dennis?
The man who had introduced himself as Jim said, Dennis, would you be Dennis Hough .........Junior? yes Dennis responded I am. Dennis, I knew your father and grandmother quite well, would you like to join us for an after dinner coffee? This is Susan Exbridge who also knew your father and was business partnets with your dear grandmother. Dennis looked at them and did not respond for five entire seconds......Yes, he said,, I would like to do just that. They seated themselves again and the older man ordered three coffees.
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Don't apologize for brain freeze. I didn't remember how to pronounce "Hough" so you do not have a monopoly on that particular phenomenon.
I definitely think Dennis should be a good guy dealing with his demons. Qwill has had to exorcise a few demons of his own, and I would love to know how he got himself healed enough that he can keep alcohol in the house for his friends and not touch it himself. He would be the perfect mentor for Dennis. And perhaps we might even see an A. A. chapter in Pickax.
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8:52 am July 22, 2011
| Beth
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I agree, Joyce. Maybe through Dennis, Jr's tribulations we can gain insight and learn more about Qwill during his drinking years and how he copes with it so well for so long. You have been a mentor to me, making nice comments on my feeble attempts at writing and giving me this forum to vent. I have been through some stressful times lately and when I am about to explode I start writing.
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You are so kind, Beth! And a talented storyteller. And it is the best treat in the world to be asked how I want a story to proceed. I look forward to how you work out Qwill's past in this endeavor.
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6:12 pm July 22, 2011
| Beth
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Dennis sippped his hot coffee slowly and gazed across the table at the two people sitting, staring at him. He said, You said you knew my father. But you mentioned a grandmother. I never thought about having a grandmother. She was from here? From Moose County? he asked. Errr no, not exactly from here. Before I begin, Qwill said, I must say, you look so much like your father, it is amazing. You could be his twin, and since the last time I saw him he was around your apparent age, it is startling for us to see you. Your voice is much like his as well. Please excuse us, it takes us back twenty years. I do, I look like him? The woman spoke for the first time, Oh yes, you do. You really do. I have a picture of your father when he was in a play for our theater club, a cast picture, that I keep on the bookcase behind my desk at the shop.........so I see it daily and you really do. Dennis studied the woman. She appeared in her fifties, or maybe older. You keep his picture out? We were close friends Dennis and as I said, his mother was my partner. Partner in what, Dennis asked. Qwill interrupted, Dennis perhaps we should begin from the begommomg. And with that Qwill reached up and tamped the end of his luxurious mustache that was tingling and itching.
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1:09 pm July 24, 2011
| Beth
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Qwilleran said, Dennis, I met your grandmother down below in the city years ago, when she was living with her second husband in a historic home and running it as a boarding house and antique's store. When I moved up here she came along to catalong antiques I owned and become curator of the muesum I was turning my home into. While here she met a man and had a brief marriage. After his deathe she became manager and curator of another muesum, but tragically her health failed and she passed away shortly after. Qwilleran stopped to let the young man absorb this information. Susan picked up the conversation next. She said, Your grandmother's name was Iris Cobb and we entered into a partnership to open "Exbridge and Cobb Fine Antiques". She was so knowedgeble about antiques and I am so thankful for all she taught me. I still own the store today. Dennis asked, "Did my father help her in the muesum and store?"
Qwilleran said, "No, we had not met your father up to that point. He lived in St. Louis with your mother and you. When you werer just a baby, your grandmother passed away and your father, Dennis, Senior came up here to arrange the funeral and bury his mother. You were so small your mother stayed home with you. Your father was the child of Iris' first marriage. Dennis said, I see. Thank you for this background information. I plan to visit my father's grave tomorrow. Qwilleran answered, "I am sure we have given you alot to think about tonight. After you visit the cemetary, would you allow me to take you to lunch? I have more to tell you. Yes, Dennis said. I will pick you up here at the hotel, Qwill added, say, around one? As Dennis walked away from the dining room, Qwill said to Susan, I did not want to alarm him or scare him away, but someone has been loooking for him his whole life. Someone from Pickax, and I will give some thought as to how to gently arrange a meeting for him. Susan looked at Qwill, well don't keep secrets, darrrlllling, she drug out the last word for dramatic effect. Qwill just smiled at her and said, This is not one for the Pickax grapevine Susan, at least not yet. Keep Dennis Juniors arrival under your hat just for tomorrow. Okay Qwill, since you asked nicely, she said, but it may cost you another dinner. Anytine, he answered, and escorted her out the door.
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good backgrounding. now i remember where dennis came from. sorry for weird typing. cat asleep on my left hand.
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5:25 pm July 28, 2011
| Beth
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Dennis Hough found hs father's grave without much difficulty the next morning. He has asked at the hotel desk for directions to the cemetary. It was on a road called "Trevelyan". He found his father and grandmother's graves side by side, with an expensive looking headstone of both. The grave was well kept and the headstone made of granite. He learned no new information from the gravestones and did not spend much time there. He drove around the city of Pickax and noticed the shop "Exbridge and Cobb". He saw a street with victorian homes, and another street with old homes that were college buildings. It did not take long to tour this tiny town. Mr. Qwilleran had mentioned a muesum but he did not see one. He parked back at the hotel and waited for lunch by reading in the lobby. It was not long when Mr. Qwilleran arrived and asked, do you have a preference for lunch? No, Dennis answered, I really do not, Mr. Qwilleran. Call me Qwill, the man said. I will, answered Dennis. I think we will go to Onoosh's, if you like
Greek food. Yes, I do, and I must say I am surprised a town this size has a Greek restuarant. Yes, we were for some time without proper eating establishments, but we have become more civilized as of late, Qwill said.
They busied themselves with lunch, and afterwards, Qwill leaned back in his chari and said,
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6:25 pm July 29, 2011
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Dennis, when your grandmother passed away, she left her estate to your father. And likewise when he passed away he left his estate to you, his only child. Have you been given information regarding this matter? Errr no, Dennis said, and that is certainly not why I drove up here. I was just looking for information about a father I did not know about growing up and only recently learned existed. Well, I should not get ahead of myself, Dennis. Let me tell you about your father. Dennis sat back in his chari and said, please do, Qwill.
Dennis, after your grandmother passed away due to meical issues, your father came up to Moose County to bury her, as I told you yesterday. He was an architect and a builder. He decided to undertake a massive project for me, and stay in Moose County for awhile. He remodeled an old Apple barn on my property into a magnificent home. It was featured in several national archtectural magazines and I would have copies to show you if they had not burned. I lost my barn in a fire several years ago. I am sorry to hear that Qwill. It was your father's masterpiece. There are pictures on file at the newspaper here, and I can access them for you later. While here your father made friends easily and participated in the theater club. However, his absence from home caused a rift in his marriage and your mother filed for divorce. Your father died suddenly shortly after hearing this news. Dennis said, very tragic to die so young. I tell you Qwill I was headed in that direction before I decided to come up here and investigate my dad. I was drinking to much and my girlfriend left me. I was raised by my mom and step dad to believe he was my real dad. We lived overseas for years, but when we arrived back in the states I was seventeen and asked mom for my birth certificate to get my drivers lisence and tha tis when I found out. It was quite a shock that I had been lied to by my parents.
Dennis, I too drowned my sorrows in the bottle many years ago, when my life was out of control. I understand what it takes to sober up and go on with life. You did the right thing coming jup to check things out here in Pickax. If you don't mind, I have scheduled an appt. with your father's attorney of record and he would like to talk to you about her inheritence. Dennis said, well, if you think I should Qwill. I jsut don't want people to think I came up seeking money or anything. No, not at all Dennis. This attorney was delighted to find you were in town. To be honest he has been looking for you for many years to settle the estate.
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2:52 pm July 30, 2011
| Beth
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If it is okay with you I can drive you over there after we finish lunch. If you can spare the time Qwill, I could. Yes Dennis, I am semi retired. I write a newspaper column and that does not keep me to busy. They drove together to the offices of Bennett and Barter, attorneys at law. Qwill introduced Dennis to Bart and started to walk away. If you don't mind Qwill, I could use some support Dennis said, looking white as a ghost. Yes I can stay, I just did not want to interfere. They sat opposite Bart and he welcomed them with a cup of coffee and small talk about the weather, a popular subject in Moose county. After the preliminaries, Bart got down to business. Mr. Hough he said, you are the sole heir to your grandmothers and your fathers estates. He inherited property and money from Iris Cobb, his mother shortly before his death. The property includes, a condo at a development here called Indian Village, which as executor I have rented out for you in absentee for years, a house on Travelyn Lane, formerly owned by her third husband Mr. Hackpole, which I also rented out, profits from a buisness Mr. hackpole owned (car lot), which I sold, and all moneys from these sales and rents. This also includes
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4:38 pm July 30, 2011
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the money she in inherited from Mr. Hackpoles' business vetures back east. The total figure of the rents, sales and inherited money is $5,980,465.44. I have inversted some of the money and it has done rather well. I have bought tax write offs to reduce your tax debt each year. I purchaed a horse farm in Lockmaster for you and used it as a tax write off, by purchasing and increasing development of the farm each year. I purchased an old hotel in Mooseville for you called Northern LIghts and improvements to it each year is an additional reduction in taxes. So you own a horse farm, a hotel and recently I purchaed a block of businesses in a town called Sawdust city, which had fallen on hard times. I am in the process of having it restored and rented out. Not knowing if I would ever find you, but out of respect for your father and grandmother, I have done my best and hope it meets with your approval. Dennis sat silently and stared at the attorney. Several minutes passed and he said, uh, Mr. Hough, are you okay. Can I get you some water?
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5:00 pm July 30, 2011
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Dennis Hough's mind was racing. He looked at the attorney as if he had said the world was flat. Did he say five million dollars? Did he say a horse farm, a hotel.........a condo, a house......Dennis gulped and squeaked out, yes, I'd like some water please. I don't understand Dennis said, my mom and step father made a good living but it seems they would have wanted me to have this and have access to this raising me. I was never able to find your mother or you Dennis, Bart said. Well we lived out of the country for 17 years Dennis said. Oh, I see Bart answered, that may have been why it was so difficult to track you. Wow Dennis said, wow. I don't know what to say, I just drove up here on a lark to see my fathers grave and I have acquired a former grandmother and now this. Qwill spoke, I know it is a shock, I can sympathize with you, in more ways than one, Dennis. Let's go and Bart can prepare the paperwork to sign everything over to you. Bart said, Dennis, do you happen to have your drivers lisence on you and I don't suppose your Birth certificate. Well as a matter of fact I do, sir, I brought it because it is the only tangible thing I have with my father's name. Leave it with me if you will and I will begin the paperwork. Your money is in the bank here in Pickax and can this can esily be dealt with. Just give me a couple of days. Where are you staying.
With the business concluded, Qwill said, well Dennis, how would you like to come over to my condo and rest and then we can go out to eat for dinner later. We can also drive around and see some sights if you want. I can take you to Mooseville to see the hotel, or the muesum your grandmother used to own. Whatever you wish. Qwill, thanks, but I think I will go to the hotel and get my thoughts together. If you have time tomorrow I will take you up on that drive and dinner. With that, they parted ways. Qwill mused, "I feel an affinity for this young man, who looks so much like his father, who I regarded as a friend. I will keep my eye on him and offer him assistance, because I know his father would want that.
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What a great fantasy! I like your detail.
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4:19 pm August 21, 2011
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Dennis Hough woke up the next morning angry. He was not sure why, but he was angry. He sat up against the pillow on the hotel bed and rubbed his hands through his thick brown hair. He guessed he was angry he never got to have a relationship with is natural father. He felt cheated. He was particularly not happy that he never knew a grandparent. His mom and stepdad's parents had passed away by the time he was five and he had few memories of them. A grandmother named Iris, the thought. How he would have loved to have known her. He was also a little miffed that he had worked two part time jobs to pay his way through college and often went with little to eat to get through his studies. He would have loved to have ten dollars much less five million back then. He did not know who he was angry at, he was just in a foul mood. He got up and got in the shower and turned the water to very warm. He tried to clear his head as the water beat down on his head.
He supposed he could trust this attorney, Allen Barter. What else could he do? He was in a strange place and did not know anyone. He thought he would call Mr. Qwilleran this morning and pump his brain for information. But before he met him, he wanted to go to the library and look at microfilm of back issues of the local newspaper.
He dressed and dialed the number Qwill had given him and arranged to meet him for lunch and then a drive around the county. He picked up his hotel key and headed out the door. It was 9 am and he supposed the library would be open soon.
After a quick breakfast in the hotel dining room he headed across the Park Circle to the imposing stone library.
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