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The Cat who knew a panther

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3:13 pm
March 25, 2011


Beth

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A tall, medium built man rolled over in his bed and put his pillow over his head. He groaned and rolled over with the pillow. Stoppppp he yelled, stop that screeching. He abruptly sat up and tossed the pillow across the room. He put his feet in his slippers and padded out of the bedroom and down the stairs. He crossed his living room in five steps and holding his fist to the large window overlooking the back yard began to bang. Stop that eternal screeching he bellowed. Suddenly, surprising him, the screeching stopped. He turned on the outside flood lights, which lit the yard all the way down to a creek and peered out. He could see nothing. He was as perplexed as he had been all week. Each night, an animal or animals began screeching in the middle of the night. Usually their noise woke up his cats, who sometimes joined in the chorus of yeows, and meows and screeches. Tonight his cats remained silent. Perhaps they were getting used to the noise he thought as he stroked his long luxurious mustache. He said out loud, to no one, I wonder if the noise woke up Joe next door this time. His neighbor, Joe Bunker had been heard, yelling and pounding at the sounds the night before. He turned off the floodlights and slowly climbed back up the stairs. As he did, his cats began to yeowwwwwww. All these nightly interruptions had begun to effect their sleep and schedule. They heard him downstairs and thought it was time for breakfast. They did not sound like they were going to stop anytime soon, so he went to their bedroom and let them out. The television he kept on in their room on a nature channel was showing gorillas in the forest. He always kept the sound muted. The cats promptly got in his bed with him and he got into the bed himself, he began stroking the little one, as much to sooth himself as her.

5:33 pm
March 25, 2011


Joyce McDonald

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Oh, I'm glad you moved this to the Forum! We're glad to have your comments anywhere, but we can keep the story episodes together here, and our readers really like them (me too!) I thought the screeching at first was Marconi the owl, since it sounded like Qwill may have been in the barn. But from your title, I suspect it may be a panther. Since I have a totally black cat (you all know Friday), whose nickname is "prowling panther" I will be delighted to hear more about "Panther".

9:28 am
March 26, 2011


Beth

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Qwilleran fell into a deep soul satisfying sleep with Koko in the crook of his knees and Yumyum in the crook of one underarm. He woke up a bit cramped to the sound of someone ringing the front doorbell. They had been ringing for awhile before his brain reached consciousness and he grumbled as he dislodged the cats. They two were unhappy over this state of events and yeowed loudly in protest. Qwilleran found his robe and slippers and made his way clumsily down the stairs to the front door. He swung it open and barked, who is it at the same time. It was Amanda Goodwinter and she marched in uninvited. Amanda happened to be the mayor of the fair city in which Jim Qwilleran lived and worked. He had moved to the city of Pickax over a decade before, when he inherited money from a distant "aunt", who had actually been a friend of his mothers and not a "proper" aunt. Qwill, where is your coffee, why don't I smell that tar you call coffee. I need some coffee, Amanda barked as she pushed her way to the kitchen area of the condo Qwill shared with two cats. Amanda, if you will calm down and lower your voice, where I can think, I will brew some. Get quiet, get quiet she bellowed, That wild varmmit yelling and waking up the dead did not get quiet last night. I have not slept in a week, she said, lowering her voice a bit. Qwill went about the routine of making coffee and placed some Scotish shortbread out, slicing it and passing it to Amanda. Well I need some butter on this mess to get it down. I don't know why all you Scots eat this stuff. I would rather havd a doughnut or cinnamon roll, she barked. The coffee began to brew and filled the condo with a rich aroma. He quickly passed a cup to Amanda. We have got to do something about this animal making all this noise. I plan to call the state forest service today she said. As soon as I get to my office. And why isn't your newspaper covering this story. They should get one of their reporters out there tonight and find this animal. Amanda, can you really picture Roger out in the woods at 3 am with a camera and tape recorder, interviewing a screeching animal. Her answer was Hummmmpffff. Well there has to be an agency that is in charge of wild screeching animals. What do you think it is , Qwill?

10:11 am
March 26, 2011


Joyce McDonald

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Good characterization of Amanda. And I loved the kitty cuddling scene. Qwill sometimes doesn't get enough of those. Amusing story line! One nitpick: Scottish shortbread has to be broken. It is too crisp to slice. I thought the undercurrent of the cinnamon rolls was amusing, because Qwill keeps some in his freezer, but doesn't seem to be inclined to offer one to Amanda--and with good reason! These little details are nice little signals to loyal fans.

2:55 pm
March 26, 2011


Beth

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Thanks for the info on scottish shortbread. I have never had any. And we shall see if this is a "real" panther.............or perhaps............not, lolololol. Joyce your encourgement means alot to me!

7:10 pm
March 26, 2011


Joyce McDonald

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Scottish shortbread is a passion of mine. I had an uncle in Scotland (I'm a McIntyre who married a McDonald) who used to send us a tin of shortbread every Christmas, and it was my favorite Christmas treat. I still buy some now and then.

I'm really getting spoiled, being allowed to see firsthand possible story lines as they develop, so I really appreciate those of you who make the effort to write.

12:47 pm
March 29, 2011


Beth

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By the time Amanda left, Qwilleran was in a foul mood. The early morning visit, coupled with being woken up in the middle of the night several times during the last week left him with a short fuse. He should have just taken a nap when she left, but instead he drove to Lois' Luncheonette. He thought a stack of her pancakes was what he needed. So when he parked downtown and walked up to her door, he was in no mood to see a closed sign and a locked building. He walked briskly, mumbling to himself as he strode toward the office of The Moose County Something, the local newspaper. So briskly, as a matter of fact that he tripped over a slight uneven place in the sidewalk and fell, sprawling on the sidewalk with a thumb. He stayed there. To shocked to immediately get up. He happened to have fallen right in front of "Exbridge and Cobb" Fine Antiques, a classy store owned by Susan Exbridge, who he counted as one of his friends. She came running out of the store and helped him to his feet.

Qwill, Qwill darling.....are you all right. I saw you trip. Here let me help you up. Are you hurt anywhere? No, no, just my pride I think, he answered her as she led him into the store. Here sit down and I will get you some coffee. He sat down at the back of the store where she had a silver service with hot coffee and a silver Victorian tray with slices of cherry coffee cake. He drank the much needed coffee and ate some cake. The color is coming back in your face, Qwill, I think you will be okay. Thank you, Susan. I have had a frustrating morning and missed breakfast. Well, she said, I hope you were not counting on eating at Lois'. She did not open this morning and no one knows why. People have been knocking on the luncheonetter door and gathering and complaining all morning.

Well thank you Susan, I must be going, and thank you for the coffee and cake. No problem Qwill, you just gave me a scare is all.

Qwilleran decided to return to his car and go home and take a long morning nap. This was highly unusual for him, but the lack of sleep was getting to him and had probably caused him to stumble. Before he could get to his car, Junior Goodwinter, editor of the newpaper hailed him......Qwill, Qwill.........I need to talk to you.

3:12 pm
March 29, 2011


Beth

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The two men walked over to the newspaper office and Qwill sat down in Junior's office. Junior was pacing up and down. Qwill we have been getting phone calls, emails, and letters about a strange howling noise at night out at the Village. Have you heard anything? Well yes I have Junior and it is more like a screech and very loud. It sounds like it is coming from across the creek from my condo. Well Qwill it is like this, someone anonomously called the state police and they are coming down to comb the woods. The caller told them they thought it was a woman screaming help. We got a tip this morning and Arch wants someone to go out there with the police and report. Roger is to afraid and I can't go. I was wondering...........wait a minute Junior, I am a lowly columnist, I can't go thundering around in the woods in the dark getting in the way of the state police. Nothing doing! Well Qwill it would be a great by line and..........NO! Qwill snapped, you will just have to get someone else. Alright, alright Qwill, I just knew you would snap at the chance. Qwill stood up and left, walking to his car with his head down and drove home. He took off his shoes, climbed the condo stairs and much to the cat's disbelief, took a nap in the middle of the morning.

4:08 pm
March 30, 2011


Joyce McDonald

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I like the action here. It feels very "Pickax". The characterization is on target, too, especially Susan Exbridge, with her "Darling" and her silver coffee service.

1:31 pm
April 1, 2011


Beth

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Qwilleran arose to a ringing telephone and a yeowing cat. He had slept through their noon snacktime. And Yumyum was not letting him forget it. Neither was Koko. He answered the telephone while trying to quiet to indignant Siamese cats. It was Junior Goodwinter, Qwill, you will never guess what happened. Two hikers found a dead body in the woods across the creek from your condo! I don't know the particulars, I am trying to find out to get it to press. I just thought you would want to know since we were just talking about it. By the way Qwill, what is wrong with the cats, I can hear them screaming! Qwill mumbled something into the phone which may or may not have been goodbye. He was not used to a daytime nap and it had left him groggy. He made his way downstairs and served the cats so Kabibbles made by his friend Celia Robinson. He refilled their water dishes and turned on the radio just in time to hear Weatherby good announce, body found in Indian Lake woods, two miles from the Indian Lake Village Development. He decided, since he had not eaten a proper breakfast he would have a slightly larger lunch than usual and drove to the McIntosh Inn to dine. As he drove, he felt an unusual tingling in his mustache and tamped it down with one hand.



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