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The topic of Qwill’s gifts struck a chord with me, perhaps because I’m married to an accountant. Like just about any bean counter, Qwill is tight with money. It is not that he means to be stingy, because he has way more money than he’ll ever spend, and knows it on a conscious level. However, subconsciously, he is still that penniless reporter who sometimes didn’t know where his next meal was coming from. Old habits die hard. I think Qwill’s true nature is best shown in “Saw Red†when he wrote a check for three fourths of his hard won prize money to help his former flame, Joy, get free of her husband.
Qwill, like many men, is also clueless as to what women want in the gift department. Thus, he uses personal shoppers or lets the salesperson talk him into buying something because it is elegant, nicely made, etc. Once he makes the decision, he just multiplies it by the number of women who mean something to him and buys one for each. I think with Polly, Qwill has already decided that no matter what he buys for her, it will be the wrong thing, so what the heck, he’ll just buy the first thing that catches his eye.
This is not to say he is right. It just means that his background is showing.
Another reason to consider with Qwill’s lack of ability to commit–his first wife is in a mental hospital. Could it be that perhaps he feels that his own behavior put her there, and he doesn’t want to wish that on anyone else?
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8:54 am July 23, 2009
| susan
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I agree, I'm married to a accountant too and money issues are big in our marriage, but also I notice that the analytical types are less hip as to what women need than as, say, artistic types. I think Qwill was afraid of marriage but also that Polly wasn't right for him. I tried to show that he could find the right woman in my story Qwill. I think for my part I hated the idea that he would become a crotchety, lonely old man. Even Homer Tibbett married eventually.
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4:59 pm July 25, 2009
| Karen
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I guess we all approach this subject of Qwill to marry or not to marry, based on our own life experiences, our loves, hurts, successes, failures, marital status, belief system. I do not feel like every single person in the world was meant to marry and will be lonely and wish they had when they grow old. Some people are not afraid of marriage, they make a conscious choice that marriage is not something they want. It takes all kind of people. Qwill has let it be known, (or LJB) has let it be known that Qwill does not want to live the life of a married person. He prefers being single. I respect that in this character. I have enjoyed all the fan fiction on this site and each person's perspective. I do not feel like Qwill will ever marry or needs to, just my spin on things.
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11:27 am July 26, 2009
| Praline
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Polly decided on cabinets for her new kitchen in the Manhaten apartment that were finished in a light, almost creamy beige glazed/pickled finish. They looked so “French Country†and that would be the major direction of the design. She chose a medium colored granite for the countertops, called sunburst, basically light brown with light streaks running across it in long linear stripes. The kitchen would have an island with two chopping blocks built into the granite. Mat finished stainless steel appliances and natural wood flooring completed her design. She was having so much fun! The walls in the kitchen would be a creamy beige, one step darker than the cabinets, with a hint of yellow to it. The window would be dressed with a large fabric valance, almost poofy she mused. The fabric was a dark yellow with small red almost toille print. She picked out dark yellow, red, and green mixed scatter rugs which had a border of small roosters, and a large ceramic rooster, with a black wrought iron basket on his head, standing two and a half feet tall, held green, red and yellow fresh apples sat slightly off center on the kitchen island. The kitchen had a wine coolor and a walk in wine pantry, as well as another pantry. They had bought the apartment next door and added it’s square footage to their apartment, allowing her to have a very large kitchen. On one wall she displayed a series of copper molds and wrought iron antiques. She stepped back and looked at the finished product and was so very happy. She thought to herself, I have just enough time to go downstairs and get the mail, before Paul gets home. He will be so surprised the kitchen was finished today. Paul had seen it completed minus the curtain and decorations, and now he would see it “dressedâ€. Polly rode the elevator downstairs and got the mail from the small box in the entryway. She thumbed through the mail as she walked back to the elevator and suddenly stopped short. A letter from Pickax. From George Allen Barter’s firm. She ran her finger over the return address…..how odd she thought. What could they want with her. They were not her attorneys. She quickly made her way upstairs and went to her desk in one corner of the master bedroom and retrieved her letter opener. It was a sterling silver antique, a gift from Paul. She slit the letter open and began to read…………..
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11:47 am July 26, 2009
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Dear Mrs. Dumont, We are writing to inform you that the reading of Maggie Sprinkle's will takes place on November 19. According to the terms of the will, each party included must by physically present at the reading to retain the inheritance Ms. Sprinkle has so generously set aside for them. We request your presence at this reading at 10:00 in the morning. We would appreciate an RSVP by November 10th.
Polly was stunned. She did not know Maggie Sprinkle had passed away. She had so completely cut herself off from Moose County for awhile. She needed to. She had not really been close to Maggie. Maggie had been on the library board at one time. Maggie had been far closer to Qwill than herself. She sighed, what in the world had Maggie left her and why the provision she had to go personally to the reading of the will.
Would it be considered the height of bad manners to refuse the gift maggie had left and not go? Did she care what people in Pickax thought of her? No doubt if she went, she would see Qwill at the reading. Maggie surely left him a memnto of their friendship. She would talk this over with Paul when he got home. Later, so there would not be a damper put on their joy over the completion of the kitchen. Polly walked through the apartment and opened the oven, pulling out a pan with two cornish hens roasting with a orange glaze. She basted the birds and returned them to the oven. She walked over to the stove top and absentmindedly stirred the creamed spinach. She took it off the stove, put a top on it and placed it in the warming drawer in the kitchen island, returning the red toile hot pads to the drawer she had decided to keep them in. Just then the apartment door opened and a tall, handsome man strolled in tossing his keys in the drawer of an antique french table in the entryway.
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1:45 pm July 26, 2009
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After a wonderful evening, Polly and Paul were in bed, talking about their day. Paul told Polly he had to fly out for France in two weeks, for business. He told her he would be gone about four days minimum and at the most six. He asked her to come, now that the apartment was almost 100% completed. She told him of her letter from Moose County. She suggested she might go there for the reading of the will while he was in France. They debated the pros and cons and decided this would be the best thing to do. When he returned from France, they would make plans for christmas festivities which were right around the corner and she talked about how she would enjoy decorating the apartment for christmas. Polly had always thought she would enjoy decorating her own space, but now had the money to anything she wanted. Paul had given her an unlimited budget. He loved seeing her happy and busy. She had almost built a house one time, and had a hard time making decorating choices because of such a limited budget. It was before she had inherited a bit of money from Lynette and the Duncan antiques. She had the Duncan antiques taken out of storage and had incorporated some of them in the apartment. Others she saved in storage for the summer home in the country she and Paul would buy or build. She remembered with much distaste when Qwill had suggested his youthfull pal "Fran Brodie" decorate the home she was planning with such love and care. It was like a slap in the face. Back then, so many years ago, when Qwill had been in Pickax just a few years, everyone in town, except Fran's father knew she was making a play for Qwill every chance she got, using interior design as an excuse. Now Polly was able to fulfill the desire she had always had to design the spaces she lived in. She wondered who she would see at the attorneys office in Pickax. Probably Amanda Goodwinter had been left a bequest. She and Maggie were unlikely friends, but close friends indeed. As Paul rolled over to turn out the bedroom lamp, she siged a long sigh as a contented woman. She refused to let speculation over what she would find in Pickax unbalance her life with Paul. Warm enough dear, he said, no, she replied as she moved closer to him, he reached out his arms for her and she sighed again.
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2:06 pm July 26, 2009
| Praline
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Polly stepped off the plane in Moose County that cold November day, and pulled her coat around her tighter. She took the shuddle van to the McIntosh Inn. The shuddle van was a new addition to airport service. She looked out at the bleek winter views as the van sped along. She wondered if the deer here were still such a problem this time of year, for drivers. As the van arrived in Pickax, proper, she looked about noticing a few changes in downtown. The Pickax Library had winter mums planted in a new planter box. The Post office had a new drop box by the street. Small changes. She walked into the lobby of the McIntosh Inn and stood in front of Lady Anne’s portrait and took in the beauty of the painting. As she turned around she was facing Susan Exbridge. Hello Polly. Hello Susan, Polly said. The two woman walked on without anything else. Susan was looking good in a chocolate brown suit with a turquoise scarf and suede chocolate brown high pumps. Polly noted Susan’s short modern hairstyle that allowed large copper earings to show. Susan wore clothes with polish.
However Polly thought she looked passable herself with her medium/short Paris hairstyle, pewter earings, black wool suit with bright turquoise print scarf. Polly was dying her hair a dark brown color called “expresso†now. The scarf had geometric shapes of black, gray and bright truquoise, and draped long down the front of her black suit. She wore a muted coppery red lipstick that she had received many compliments when wearing.
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9:46 pm July 26, 2009
| Coriannie
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Praline, this is great! And also has me very curious! Wouldn't it be a hoot to see Qwill, Zoe, Susan Exbridge and Polly all run into each other in the lobby? Or not....
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7:43 pm July 28, 2009
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hey, I just found this story...great job and very interesting. Can't wait to see what is going to happen
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8:46 pm July 29, 2009
| Praline
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Polly did not sleep well that night. She tossed and turned and missed her husband. The next morning she put on a pair of casual khaki pants, tennis shoes, a lined trench coat in khaki and a bright azure blue knit hat and went out for an early morining walk to clear her head. She walked along the streets of Pickax and felt a tug in her heart........of homesickness. She had lived most her live here. It would be impossible not to miss it at times. Not many cars or people were on the street at this hour. I was 6:00 am and Lois' was just opening, but it was hours before most business establishments would open their doors. '
She returned to the hotel feeling alive after her brisk walk. She was surprised to find the hotel dining room open and starting the breakfast service. She sat down at a table and had the room almost to herself. Almost.
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8:59 pm July 29, 2009
| Praline
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Polly was half way finished with a cup of tea and some poached eggs and toast, when she looked up and Weatherby Goode walked in. Polly he said, walking over to her. She stood up and he clasped both his hands in hers. Good to see you. I heard you were coming in for the reading of Maggie's will, and I decided to check in to make sure you were doing okay. Joe, Polly exclaimed, how good of you. How did you know I would be up so early. Well to be honest, i was just going to inquire at the desk............ask if you had arrived and checked in. I was going to leave you a message that I could pick you up to go over to the attorney's office. Oh Joe, thank you, that would be good. I do not have transportation. Also, he added, you might need an old friend for fortification and since I am named in the will, we might as well go together. Sit down Joe, sit and have a cup of tea with me. I am ready for a second cup. Make it coffee Polly. The waitress came over and Joe placed his order for coffee and omlet with cheese and ham. He picked up a piece of toast from the table and started nibbling. You have come alone Polly? Yes, she answered, Paul had buisness to attend to and I decided to come on alone. I cannot imagine what Maggie left me in her will. How kind of her to remember me. Well, Polly, after you left, Maggie soon lost most of her lovely ladies to old age. One passed away after another. I had Catta and Brutus boarded until I could decide on an adoptive family. Maggie stepped up and decided to adopt them. I have a feeling she left them to you. They are currently being boarded. I don't mean to spoil the surprise, but I thought you should know as soon as possible, so you can decide whether it is feasible for you to take them back, now that you are in U. S.
Polly was speachless.
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9:14 pm July 29, 2009
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No, I am not crazy about surprised Joe. I am glad you told me. Joe's food was served and they concentrated on eating.
Polly excused herself after awhile and told Joe she needed to change and get ready for their 10:00 appt. She went upstairs. He planned to return to pick her up at 9:40. It was a 10 minunte drive to G. Allen Barter's office at best.
Polly showered and dryed her hair. She put on make up. She chose to wear a suit of royal blue. It had a short jacket with a black collar. The silk shirt she wore under the suit was black with a scooped neckline. She wore the pearls Paul had given her for her birthday, with a pair of dropped pearl earings she had bought herself. The base of the earings were encircled with diamonds. She added a thin gold bangle braclet. Her coat was black and she wore black leather boots for warmth, with a bit of heel.
At the assigned time she went downstairs to meet Joe. He was waiting in the lobby for her. He held out his arm and she took it. Careful he said, the steps are a bit slick. She settled herself in his car and they drove off. She inquired how Jet Stream was doing. She asked about the residents in Indian Village. He talked, filling her in on some of the latest happenings.
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11:58 pm July 29, 2009
| Coriannie
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Praline, this is wonderful! Thank you so very much!
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4:32 pm August 5, 2009
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They arrived at the attorney's office and were 10 minutes early. Joe helped Polly off with her coat and they hung their outer garments on a coat rack. The receptionist offered them some tea. They both refused. The office was warm and quiet. Just as Polly was about to initiate a converstion, the door swung open and Qwill, Mildred, Arch, and Amanda walked in. Polly was transported back a over the years as she looked at them. Joe stood up, and Polly remained seated. Polly, dear exclaimed Mildred, swooping down to embarce her, as Polly stuck out her hand for a handshake. Mildred awkwardly shook it. You look wonderful, Mildred said. Mildred, Polly answered, you look well, yourself. What a bright and interesting shade of green. Thank you, Mildred said. Arch shook Polly's hand. Polly said hello Arch, how are you. Well I am frustrated leaving the paper in the middle of a deadline, couldn't this attorney have done this another day. No one realizes .......just then Mildred put an hand on Arch's arm and he turned and quieted down. Polly spoke to Qwilleran next. Hello Qwill, how are you. Qwill responded more stiffly than he meant to, I am well, and you? Fine, I am fine, she said. Well hell, Amanda snorted, I hate to break up this little reunion, but I need some coffee. Is anyone going to offer me some coffee?
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11:56 pm August 6, 2009
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Gotta love Amanda!! Praline, you captured her beautifully, as you did Mildred, Arch, Joe, and of course, Qwill.
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12:11 pm August 8, 2009
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Oh goodness, Polly thought to herself, this may be worse than I anticipated. Amanda has not changed any, not that I thought she would. Still her same abrasive self, and her dress! A rust and navy plaid skirt with oxblood loafers and a brown shirt tucked in, topped with a bright orange downfilled coat!. It was atrocious. Mildred Riker looked the same, a shirt of bright green with ruffles around the v neck and a flowing skirt, long sleeves that ended in more ruffles. Arch looked the same. Qwill looked sad. His eyes that were shaped down at the corners looked more sad than she remembered. He was a bit ........older also.
The receptionist broke in on Polly's thoughts and said, Mr. Barter will see you know. G. Allen Barter rose from his place at the head of the conference table in the law office's library. Come in, come in, did Bridget offer you any coffee, tea. I'll take some coffee, black Amanda said. No nothing for me said Qwill and Mildred. Polly and Joe Bunker said no, but Arch decided to have some. Please, sit down Barter said. Qwill looked at Arch who looked at Mildred.......Mildred took the cue and placed herself next to Polly, Amanda next to Mildred, Joe, Arch and Qwill sat on the opposite side of the table. Barter began, I will dispense from the word for word reading of Maggie's will and summarize if I may. First may I ask, Polly, how was your flight? Fine she said. And your hotel accomdations. Fine she said. How was the weather in New York when you left. Fine, fine she said. I am sorry your husband could not make the trip with you. No, he is out of the country on business she said. Amanda snorted. Bart cleared his throat, well, we will get on with the bequests our dear Maggie made in her will, to her good friends.
As you may already have heard, she left generous donations to all of the charities she supported throughout her life.
She had a collection of rose patternned quilts, rose patterned glassware, and rose patterned china, and she wanted you to have these personal items Mildred. Mildred gushed, oh, sweet Maggie, I had admired her china and glassware so many times. I will treasure them.
Joe she wanted you to have her dear husbands's collection of antique sheet music, and her piano. Joe nodded his head.
Arch, she wanted you to have her antique copper and pewter containner collection. Oh nice, Arch said, I have an extensive tin collection, how did she know.
Amanda she left you the building downtown that she lived in and housed the insurance office on the bottom floor. She thought you might have some ideas of how it could be used.
Qwill she left you her library, all the books she has not already donated or given away, in her home library. She had many that belonged to her husband's father. Qwill said rather emotionally, one can never have to many books.
And lastly, Polly, she adopted Brutus and Catta when you moved to Paris. Catta now is a plumb matronly old cat and Burtus is blind in one eye and sleeps most of the day but otherwise healthy. She did not want them boarded the remainder of their life, and hoped you might want them back, so they could finish out their years with someone who loved them.
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3:07 pm August 8, 2009
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With that, G. Allen Barter invited the group to join him at the Old Grist Mill for lunch. It has a new chef from New Orleans and a new lunch menu. Polly thought, do I dare....do I dare go...what if I make Qwill uncomfortable....I will go, I have missed these old friends. I will go and enjoy myself. Everyone agreed except Arch who was on deadline, and rushed back to his office. Polly drove out to the mill with Weatherby Good, who she never called Weatherby, always Joe. Look at the snow starting to fall, she commented, as they drove. Oh Joe, when I see a fresh snowfall start in the middle of the day, I always think of Lynette. She loved a new snow during the day. I miss her. Joe agreed, saying, yes Polly I will always partly blame myself for her death. If only I had stepped up and declared my fondness for her. Maybe she would not have had her head turned by that scheming criminal who came to town to rob and steal and destroy. Oh Joe, please don't blame yourself. One never can live by "what ifs" or "if onlys." Look what happened between Qwill and myself. I would not have been able to forge a new life for myself, after I decided to stay in Paris, if I lived by "if onlys". They arrived at the Old Grist Mill and was met by an attractive young hostess. I am Meredith, she said, Would you like the large table by the window. Yes that will be fine. They were seated, and Derrek Cuttlebrink, manager, came out of his office and also greeted them. There was a standing instruction for the hostess to inform him each time Jim Qwilleran came into the mill. Qwill he said, hello, what a great party you have brought to lunch, he laughed. G. Allen Barter spoke up, these are my guests, Derek. Just then Derek recognized Polly and said, Mrs. Duncan, so good to see you. Let me get your waiter for your drink order. It is good to see you to Derek, and congratulations on being manager. How is Elizabeth? Everyone froze. Mildred spoke first, Polly, Elizabeth passed away in a car accident earlier this year. Oh dear, I did not know Polly said, I am so sorry Derek, please accept my condolences. Polly thought, oh goodness, what else do I not know.
Yes, it was terrible, Mrs. Duncan, and Derek sauntered away.
Oh I hope I did not upset him, Polly exclaimed. No, no, he is dealing with it pretty well said Joe. He will be okay.
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3:58 pm August 8, 2009
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Praline, I am enjoying your story so much. I am glad you are writing more on it now. I love your description of the food and clothes. Thank you for writing this.
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10:28 am September 3, 2009
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Polly was very embarrassed, but the lunch passed quickly and before she know it she had said goodbye to everyone and Joe drove her to the Boarding facility to see the cats. On the way, she told Joe that her husband was allergic to cats and dogs both. She would not be taking them home. She would talk to the animal boarding facility about a possible home for them in Moose County. She has made her goodbyes with them,, and was thrilled Maggie had given them a home. But her new husband was her first priority. Joe Bunker asked her, do you think it is better then, not to see them. I could handle the arrangements for them to be adopted for you, like I did when you stayed in Paris. Polly thought...........Would you do that, she finally said. Yes, think that is a better idea, Joe. I have some ideas Joe said. My sister, the university professor who loves crows has retired and is living in Mooseville bye the lake. She has expressed an interest in adopting an older pet so she would not have to go through the kitten or puppy stage. Perhaps you met her when she visited our area years ago? Polly chuckled at the memory of the "Republic of Croatia". Yes, she said, that is a wonderful idea.
With that taken care of, Joe Bunker drove her back to the hotel. She was to fly out that afternoon. He waited for her to pack and check out and drove her to the airport. Polly he said, I wish all the best with your new life in New York, your marriage, you deserve it. She gave him a hug and thanked him. Joe keep in touch and you are welcome to visit us if you can get away, anytime. Thank you , Joe said. He watched Polly's plane take off, deep in thought. No one imagined that Polly would be the one to break out of Moose County and start a new life. Of all his friends in his age group, she seemed the least likely. Drat that Qwill for letting her go like that. Maybe he should have encouraged Qwill to fight for her. Qwill was just so laid back sometimes. But he did not want to interfere between the two on such a personal subject, so he had never approached Qwill about it. With all Qwill's money, there was poor Polly, getting up every day early, working, taking vacation alone without him, she must have gotten so tired. She deserved not to work, to be treated with a life of a little luxery. The sad thing is Qwill could have provided this for her in an instant if he would have. Why did he let this wonderful woman slip away. He walked away from the airport, shaking his head. He had been so full of thought he had not even thought to make fun of the airplane or airport with Polly as was the custom of the locals, when they saw off a traveller. He reached his car and gave a big sigh.
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6:21 pm September 3, 2009
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Thank you Anne! How did you know I was stuck and could not think of a way out. so you don't think Polly should take the cats. Maybe it would be bridginge the gap between her old life and new and she does not want that bridge. I like your Zoe Lambreth story.
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